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Lovely!Katie with a new haircut.
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Thanks - yeah - was a bit rushed on that one. Should have fixed the poke through. It was one of the Inked series - either Halloween 1 or 2 or minimalist. I will see if I can check for you when I get home.
The one I used was in Inked Volume 19 - Tattoo number 2. There is another one in Inked Volume 32 Tattoo number 1 for the opposite shoulder.Thank you Hon
You must be psychic. Because that outfit she wearing. Sexy Tight Suit(Katie with a new haircut.
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Really nice work, I feel as though the image is framed too close to the top of her head and how her hands are posed and expression doesn't seem quite right. It feels as if she is going into a classic anime pout, perhaps a more neutral mouth position with a slight shift to the side with the lower lip and relax the eyes to give a little 'death glare' might work.Mom doesn't like being annoyed after work
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(Critique welcome)
Thank you for comments! I agree about the posing + expression. The model is customReally nice work, I feel as though the image is framed too close to the top of her head and how her hands are posed and expression doesn't seem quite right. It feels as if she is going into a classic anime pout, perhaps a more neutral mouth position with a slight shift to the side with the lower lip and relax the eyes to give a little 'death glare' might work.
The hand holding the glass could be holding it a little lower and the empty hand may look better as a neutral position resting on the chair/couch.
That being said I do like the overall look in the lighting, DoF etc and the model is beautiful, is it custom? either way really nice work and hope to see more.
wow,beautiful,those eyes,the pinky hair,challenging her,really good.
The most obvious thing is that the face/head is too long, making her face look too thin. Its usually easier to get face proportions right before working on features.Close enough? Ok, ignore the hair... and the chin line... ok, ok, ok... not close enough...
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Close enough? Ok, ignore the hair... and the chin line... ok, ok, ok... not close enough...
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could be fisheye effect also, default perspective camera in Daz can produce this result from such a close distance, the proportions on the figure face might be acceptable, but the fisheye distortion will make it look like this from up close (note that in the original photo camera distance is much greater)The most obvious thing is that the face/head is too long, making her face look too thin. Its usually easier to get face proportions right before working on features.